Thursday, 27 July 2017

Aboriginals









In the last few weeks my class and the class bellow me, have been learning 
about injustice around the world.

                                                  We all got a subject my subject was                                                   Aboriginals, I had to make something                                                 to show what I had learned. At the end                                                   everyone had to showcase what 

                                                  they had learned. Most people made 
                                                  a slideshow, some people read from 
                                                  a peace of paper and some people 
                                                  did what I had made. I think the treatment of aboriginals is very sad and has made me realise how lucky I am.

Thursday, 15 June 2017

The toilet

The musty smell of rusted corrugated iron fills my lungs. A small slit of mussel buoy creates a tunnel to an unexplored green shed. Excitement fills me as I see a closed toilet seat above me.
" Guys It's a toilet " I yell so the others can hear me. I push the white and dusty lid open and clamber inside the small stuffy opening. Crumbling paint markes the door 'please close door' I read with difficulty. The wooden floor creaks as I walk around taking in the scene. Clear plastic covers preserved and untouched toilet paper.
Yazzie's head popes out from the toilet seat.
"Wow" she says.

Wednesday, 17 May 2017

Cold water

It was a warm sunny afternoon when my family camped by a river. Hot and sweaty we ran down to the calm eddy. I stepped in, the slimy rocks grabbed my feet pulling me in.  searching for air I clawed at the stones and hulled myself out.
lying snug in my sleeping bag with food in my tummy, I listened to mum read our book. "mum can you please read one more chapter" Kyla  and I pleaded. Mum said we weren't allowed to, so I lay back and listened  to the rushing waves beside me and fell asleep.

Monday, 10 April 2017

How to get more comments on your blog.

Ways to get more comments on your blog.
  • Put the link on to related sites.
  • Make my posts more interesting so people want to post a comment. 
  • say on the post "Please comment."
  • Make so then  the comments add to the post. like my zoom out post.
  • Ask people in your community.
  • comment on somebody's blog and then they might comment on your blog.
  • Email people and ask them to comment on your blog.

      I am writing this because it's one of the SBC (student blogging challenge) activity's.

Monday, 3 April 2017

Zoom Out

You are invited to build on to the story by adding a comment. This means you need to zoom out of the image below with your imagination...like who is holding the ice cream? What else might be in the picture if you zoomed out a bit? What might happen next?
Be sure to read others' comments first, and continue the story, by zooming out even further. We could build an amazing story. Give it a go!

So, here is the start of the story...

                               From the top of my rock, I roared the danger call.
Photo Credit: Thomas Hawk Flickr via Compfight cc

Wednesday, 15 March 2017

Nika's metaphor poem


We have been doing some writing in class,
 today we did metaphor poems.
This is my one.

Nika is a orange mini van getting dirty in mud.
Nika is a young mountain beech, reaching to the sky.
Nika is a tall freckled giraffe frolicking along grass planes.
Nika is a freshly built Bach in the native forests of New Zealand.
Nika is a camel back, draining out water.